Tuesday 12 May 2015

Personification

Some of the personification written during our writing today.

The snow ran down the road.
The rain jumped on the ground.
The hail danced on the grass.
The sand walked into the sea.
The tree waved to us in the wind.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous14 May 2015 at 19:58

    I really enjoyed reading your poems and looking at your class blog. Well done everyone!

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  2. Anonymous18 May 2015 at 12:08

    We thought your piece was very detailed but next time we think you should add more expressive words.
    Varsha and Sharon
    Room 2
    Halsey Drive Primary School

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  3. Zoe N and Upasana27 May 2015 at 12:16

    These sentences are really fantastic! Good job guys. Next time you could add more emotive language.

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