I am the teacher of Year 1 and 2 students from Opunake Primary School. You will find me in Room 15.
Keep a look out for all of the great and wonderful work I will be completing with my class throughout the year.
This week for writing we looked at a poem by Pie Corbett called Zealous Zoo. Each sentence used alliteration to write about a different animal. After reading Zealous Zoo we created our own sentences. Here is our class examples.
DEAR TROY AND LUKE. I THINK YOUR POEM WAS AMAZING. IT REALLY STOOD OUT. THE THING I WAS REALLY HAPPY ABOUT WAS YOUR ADVENTUROUS VERBS, ADVERBS, DETERMINERS AND ADJECTIVES. I LIKED THE VERB SLITHERED BECAUSE IT FITS AND ALLITERATES WITH THE WORDS SNAKE AND SINKING. FROM RC
DEAR TROY AND LUKE. I AM A PUPIL AT ROMSEY PRIMARY SCHOOL IN ENGLAND. I ENJOYED YOUR POEM IMITATING THE ZEALOUS ZOO. I LIKED HOW YOU USED AMUSING BUT SENSIBLE ADVERBS TO DESCRIBE HOW THE ANIMALS WERE DOING THESE RANDOM ASPECTS IN YOUR POEM. MY FAVOURITE LINE WAS 'THE PIG POLITELY ASKED TO PLAY THE PIANO'.
WE HAVE ENJOYED READING YOUR POEM. IT REALLY MADE US SMILE. WE LIKED THE WAY YOU USED ALLITERATION THROUGHT THE POEM. WE ALSO LIKED YOUR CHOICE OF VERBS. WE THINK THEY ARE ADVENTUROUS. YOUR ADJECTIVES ARE THE PERFECT CHOICE. YOUR CHOICE OF NOUNS ARE THE BEST BECAUSE THEY ARE ALL THE ANIMALS IN THE ZOO. I LIKED YOUR ADVERB 'POLITELY' AS IT DESCRIBED HOW THE PIG ASKED TO PLAY THE PIANO.
I really like your alliteration sentences. Well done for being so creative
ReplyDeleteDEAR TROY AND LUKE. I THINK YOUR POEM WAS AMAZING. IT REALLY STOOD OUT. THE THING I WAS REALLY HAPPY ABOUT WAS YOUR ADVENTUROUS VERBS, ADVERBS, DETERMINERS AND ADJECTIVES. I LIKED THE VERB SLITHERED BECAUSE IT FITS AND ALLITERATES WITH THE WORDS SNAKE AND SINKING. FROM RC
ReplyDeleteDEAR TROY AND LUKE. I AM A PUPIL AT ROMSEY PRIMARY SCHOOL IN ENGLAND. I ENJOYED YOUR POEM IMITATING THE ZEALOUS ZOO. I LIKED HOW YOU USED AMUSING BUT SENSIBLE ADVERBS TO DESCRIBE HOW THE ANIMALS WERE DOING THESE RANDOM ASPECTS IN YOUR POEM. MY FAVOURITE LINE WAS 'THE PIG POLITELY ASKED TO PLAY THE PIANO'.
ReplyDeleteWE HAVE ENJOYED READING YOUR POEM. IT REALLY MADE US SMILE. WE LIKED THE WAY YOU USED ALLITERATION THROUGHT THE POEM. WE ALSO LIKED YOUR CHOICE OF VERBS. WE THINK THEY ARE ADVENTUROUS. YOUR ADJECTIVES ARE THE PERFECT CHOICE. YOUR CHOICE OF NOUNS ARE THE BEST BECAUSE THEY ARE ALL THE ANIMALS IN THE ZOO. I LIKED YOUR ADVERB 'POLITELY' AS IT DESCRIBED HOW THE PIG ASKED TO PLAY THE PIANO.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used alliteration most of the way through your poem. I liked your choice of adjectives.
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